* integrals should have "du", etc. (right??)
* $\mathit{VAR}$ gives better spacing than $VAR$
* I find "within $1\sigma$" to be ambiguous; "within $\pm1sigma$" much more clear
* Changed dashes in text from hyphens to em-dashes
* Changed (some) straight quotation marks to curly ones (and removed single quotes in favour of double ones)
* Improved "°C" to just use a text symbol
* Assorted random typos, etc., but avoided rewording anything except for one particularly difficult sentence